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Beginning of my book?

Public Comments

1. Um...I didn't even read it. Just one thing...WOW.
2. How did you post that? There is a limit of 1000 characters. Isn't there?
3. Helena took the words right out of my mouth!
4. The most important sentence in a novel is the first one. If you are going to begin with dialogue, it has to be a GREAT line. BTW - "Her dad owned the top modeling agency in Morton Heights and gave birth to the top model." Oh yeah?
5. i didnt read it but to the person who asked how to post something so long is to copy and paste then dont do anything to it and it will stay at whatever length you have it.